Do I Need You? Wow, Yes!
So you want to grow your business in 2009? This is the second in a sometimes-series at Maximum Customer Experience called Building Your Business. Read part one for a look at where you are right now: Building Your Business With a Map.
You’re committed to creating a better Customer Experience, because you know that your customers will be more loyal, buy more from you, and spread fantastic word-of-mouth about your company if their Experience with your company makes you one in a million.
Can you sell me in a sentence—or hook me so well I have to read the next one?
How about in a paragraph?
What if I give you three pages to get me drooling to hand you my money?
I’m a fan of full-fledged business plans—they force you to concentrate on the details that will ultimately determine the success of a great concept.
But let me tell you, if you think I’ll wade through a 45-page business plan hoping your idea will sink in eventually, you are crazy.
If you think I’ll listen to a half-hour pitch before knowing we’ll never do business you are similarly deranged.
First impressions count—and today I’m not talking about your attire or the look of your space.
I’m talking about your concept.
What the heck do you do and why would anyone give you money for it?
You’ve got one sentence to get me to care and a paragraph, max, to get me to want to do business with you—or to know someone who should. The rest of your plan is for you.
It doesn’t need to be hard-sell, folks. It needs to be clear. Eye-opening. And a dash of Wow, I NEED THAT—how come I never knew it before?
This isn’t just for new businesses. You can probably think of examples in your own town—businesses that have been around for a while, you see their ads in the local paper, you’ve driven by a million times, but you have no idea of what they do. Not having a tight, compelling concept is like throwing your time and money out the window. No matter what stage your business is at, you’ll spend time explaining yourself that should be spent solving customers’ problems, and money advertising to generate excitement that should be spreading by word-of-mouth.
If you don’t know how to get that for your plan, your website’s home page, and your elevator pitch, then you’ve got to work with someone who can help you find the Wow!
Or you’ve got to stop throwing your money out the window at your foggy dreams.
Grow and be well,
Kelly Erickson
P.S. If you’d like help getting your concept to Wow!, email me. I know it’s time for your business to grow in 2009!













3 March 2009, 7:53 am
“Can you sell me in a sentence, or a paragraph?”
Heh heh.
How about 77,000 PAGES?
I’m not kidding. That’s apparently the size of the package that needs to be put together, in order to place a bid on building a nukular reactor.
And that’s just for ONE bidder. What about the competitive bidders?
Can you imagine the poor sucker who has to read through all that and make an informed decision on who gets the contract?
Friar’s last blog post…How to Reduce Morale and Sabotage your own Company
3 March 2009, 9:29 am
Kelly, standing up and cheering! Last night I forgot to upload today’s post which is along these lines. Happy accident because when I post I can use this as an awesome reference! As I wrote my own post, I of course found flaws in my own plan (so maybe the forgetfulness was Freudian *sigh*). You are so right on that we should not ever be so arrogant to believe that we don’t have to clearly, and succinctly state our “why” right up front. We cannot assume that we’re so dazzling that of course people will: be interested, read our entire proposal/website/brochure, or intuitively understand why they should care and more importantly why they should buy.
Karen Swim’s last blog post…In Celebration of Reading and Writing
3 March 2009, 12:13 pm
This reminds me a lot of that email chat we had in the fall – I’ve not forgotten it, you know!
It just takes time… wait for it…
(The gentle nudges I get here don’t hurt though!)
3 March 2009, 2:07 pm
Friar,
The poor sucker did what I did recently: made his or her decision in one paragraph, hen looked through thte next X pages to find sufficient reasons to back up his/ her decision.
Karen,
Thanks much. Better than those “no, I didn’t call her and decide to blog like twins” days one sometimes has, hehe. Looking forward to your post!
I like to think people will read everything I write, but of course I know it’s not so. Even those who do, are doing so because I sold them up front.
Brett,
Glad it wasn’t too forgettable. LOL. These things take a while when it’s only a gentle nudge at a time, no pressure. Besides, I know you’re working like a whirling dervish beneath the surface. You only appear smooth and calm on the outside!
Regards,
Kelly
3 March 2009, 2:26 pm
Kelly,
Oh no, it bubbles away in my brain with each passing day at The Factory. Anything worth doing is worth doing right and it will come in time. I still have to put the Missus and the Viklings first, take time out for beers with the Friar, and work of course – so… in time…
As the Klingons say, “revenge is a dish best served cold.”
3 March 2009, 3:00 pm
Poor Klingons. I prefer not to serve revenge at all.
(And so do you, you don’t fool me. Bad week at work already, my dear Factory-friends?)
3 March 2009, 4:07 pm
@Kelly
Exactly! They probably will make their decision, based on reading one paragraph, and ignore the rest. (Yet, the big bosses will STILL insist on brow-beating their staff into producing 77,000 pages no one will ever read).
Well, we’ve added a 2nd Beer night already (tonight, as well as Thursday). THAT should give you an idea how our week is going.
3 March 2009, 4:12 pm
This post is great. It reminded me of the entries we had to judge for the Sticky Business contest – They had four questions and four 250 word answers to captivate judges.
That’s all.
And in the freelance business? Your elevator pitch has to be less than one minute.
James Chartrand – Men with Pens’s last blog post…Sticky Business Contest Winners: Congrats!
3 March 2009, 4:17 pm
No, you’re right, but “entrepreneurship is a dish best served cold” just didn’t roll off the tongue.
Perhaps the Ferengi have a quote that would serve here, but I can’t remember any…
Actually, my week hasn’t been that bad – when it is boring, I think a *lot* and that is a good thing.
This week, I’ve been thinking a lot.
Brett Legree’s last blog post…viking fridays – the mind and the heart.
3 March 2009, 5:20 pm
@Brett
Ever notice how Ferengis’ foreheads like like BUTTS?
Friar’s last blog post…How to Reduce Morale and Sabotage your own Company
3 March 2009, 5:25 pm
oops. “look like”…I meant.
But you gotta admit…it’s a great resemblance.
Friar’s last blog post…How to Reduce Morale and Sabotage your own Company
3 March 2009, 5:28 pm
Yeah,they do – just like the Talosian “bum heads” from the original series…
Brett Legree’s last blog post…viking fridays – the mind and the heart.
3 March 2009, 6:00 pm
@Brett
Formula for Alien Species on Star Trek:
Resemble normal humans at 99%. Except for the one part of the face, that has to look like another part of the human anatomy.
Friar’s last blog post…How to Reduce Morale and Sabotage your own Company
3 March 2009, 6:02 pm
@Friar,
Yeah… good thing that ST is meant to be PG-13 or we’d have races such as the “Phalloids from Planet Scrotus”.
Don’t mess with them. They’re a bunch of dickheads.
Brett Legree’s last blog post…viking fridays – the mind and the heart.
3 March 2009, 6:04 pm
@Brett
…don’t forget the Amazon She-Devils from the Planet Fallopius.
Friar’s last blog post…How to Reduce Morale and Sabotage your own Company
3 March 2009, 9:19 pm
Poor Factory workers. Two beer nights in a week is a sure sign of stress.
When I get like that, I hop on the treadmill for an extra half-hour, cuddle up with a good book if that doesn’t do it, and then either give up and go to bed early or break out the champagne for a glass of giggles if I had the foresight to bring home a bottle of artificial stress-relief.
But the treadmill does the most good. Motion (usually) stops stress from eating me up.
Clearly, there’s always the blog-hijacking option… seems to relieve stress in some folks.
James,
& I wouldn’t be at all surprised if it took a lot less than four full tasks for it to be pretty obvious who knew where they were headed and how to hook you into going along.
Until later,
Kelly
3 March 2009, 10:46 pm
Kelly,
We’ve decided to actually do something with our ideas (it must have been the gentle nudges from your neck of the woods) – so we need the extra night. Tonight we decided to do what we normally do on Thursday, and unwind – Thursday I’ll be bringing a computer with me…
Yeah baby.
Brett Legree’s last blog post…viking fridays – the mind and the heart.
3 March 2009, 10:51 pm
@Kelly
Yeah…Brett just left here 15 minutes ago…we’re starting to develop our idea….I think it’s gonna be good.
Of course, I’ve just had a few shots of Scotch, so right now ANYTHING seems good.
Friar’s last blog post…How to Reduce Morale and Sabotage your own Company
3 March 2009, 10:52 pm
Ahh.
A little kvetching, a little constructive action.
That’s what I’m talking about. Good for you both.
All smiles here.
4 March 2009, 1:45 am
This is why I hire James…
Alex Fayle | Someday Syndrome’s last blog post…At a crossroads with no signposts: Introducing Lab Rat Cat
4 March 2009, 6:38 am